Second Cut

Improvements made since 1st Cut: 
• The setting has been modified to make it look more like a bedroom - making the room appear more personal to the protagonist
• Made sure that the cards were clear and easy to read
• Added new music to the piece - we feel it fits the mood of the opening more, creating a more eerie mood
• Included a new shot showing off the wall covered in hand made cards expressing how the protagonist feels
• Changed the hanging shot so it is clear she is hanging
• Made sure the chair falls over in the hanging scene - making it much more dramatic
• Modified the protagonists make up - making the bruises and cuts more prominent

Challenges we face: 
• Filming had to take place yet again with no tripod - some shots are wonky and have too much movement
• The nope is not thick enough, therefor it does not look as effective as we had hoped it would - it does not have the correct presence in the shot that we wanted
• When gathering feedback, people said that the opening was repetitive with the card sequence, so we plan to add live action and titles intercut between the sequence to break it up
• The lighting of the shots have not been kept the same, therefor re-shoots are in order as it is too much of a dramatic change to sort out using Premiere Pro.