First Rough Cut

With the footage that we got on Sunday, in class, we started to edit together what we had. Before we had exported anything, we showed our teacher who then gave us some much needed, constructive criticism. After he watched our cut, he told us that we need to consider:
- Adding another section to add variety and make the storyline slightly clearer
- Ensure our filming is accurate 
- Think about the lighting in the last clips (shadows etc)
- Ensure the cards being held up by the character can be read