Introduction of new character

After cutting together 2 drafts now, it has become clear to us (through feedback) that our opening does not have enough variety as it needs. In order to improve this and add variety to the opening, we plan to add in a character to the opening. In the story there is mention of a mystery man that is making the female protagonist feel as she does. We plan to show flashbacks of the female and the male in a live action shot. This will allow for us to use the camera in a much more creative way and will also help to break up the card sequence - something which has been suggested to us. We feel that by adding in this male character it will make the narrative of the opening much more intense and allow for people to being to gain an insightful understanding as to what our opening sequence is about - we also feel as though it will help them to understand what the rest of our film would have been about.