Problems faced and criticisms given when filming

After talking to our teachers we have been given some serious feedback as to how to improve our opening - making it evident that further filming is going to be required.

Criticism given/Problems faced: 

• not clear that protagonist is filming herself on webcam - include over the shoulder shot of protagonist filming herself to ensure this is clear
• alley way section not completely effective - add point of view shot from the antagonist
• the woods section - protagoninsts head is cut off in one shot, protagonist is out of sight of camera when running -re-film and ensure protagonist is filmed correctly
• hand over protagonist face not compeltely effective/screaming needs to be louder and more dramatic - re-film
• hanging shot appears too suddenly/no build up - add new section before to provide evidence that protagonist is suicidal
• music doesn't fit the tone/mood of sequence completely - change
• titles not effective - place actors name titles over live action/change font